Recount of weekend

hi Bloggers, 

to day i wort about a Recount of weekend 

My awesome story web

Hi Bloggers,

During reading time we read a story. our group read a story a bike for brad. it is a story about a boy that wanted a BMX bike and winning a race.

We had to write out the characters, setting, problem. outcome and actions in the story. i found this activity hard to complete.

how would you feel if you were getting a new bike?

H&M, Smiggles and more

This week, miss Lee asked us to write a fabulous recount, or a narrative about are weekend/ based on a pobble picture. We had to add all the descriptive tools we have learnt. For example, verbs, metaphor, nouns and alliteration. Nouns are naming words. Alliteration is is at least 3 words with a same letter sound at the front

I chose to write about me going to malls.

Can you rate my writing from 1 to 10?

describing a ride

HI bloggers in today's post I described a photo about a ride i had to use tools to describe it. i hope you like it.

Describing Jungle.

Hi Bloggers,

this week we were describing about a jungle if we were in it. we had to write about adverbs, adjective, verbs, similes, alliteration and metaphors. most of it is in my writing book but here is some of it.

                                                                   hope you like it.

National flower of new zealand

burnsite high school describing

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this post is about me going to burnsite high school because they had a event of Irish dancing and they ask us and the coffee man to sell hot dog and hot chips and coffee and hot chocolate look at this to see me describing.