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Wednesday, November 27, 2019

My awesome story web

Hi Bloggers,

During reading time we read a story. our group read a story a bike for brad. it is a story about a boy that wanted a BMX bike and winning a race.

We had to write out the characters, setting, problem. outcome and actions in the story. i found this activity hard to complete.

how would you feel if you were getting a new bike?



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  1. AnonymousNovember 28, 2019 at 9:27 AM

    Hi Keysha.
    I like how you added all the detail you know from the book.
    That also reminds me of when I did the story web.I added that the outcome was he got a bmx bike and won with it.
    Can you add boxes because it's makeing it hard fir me to read it.
    And also I would feel really happy and exited to like ride the bike.
    Keep up the good job that you have been doing!
    From Storm

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  2. AnonymousNovember 28, 2019 at 9:59 AM

    Hi Keysha its Grant
    I like how detail on your problem the most
    It reminds me o my story web i did about the book take me to your leader
    Next time can you work on your spelling. Thank you
    From Grant

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