I was a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I shared my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, November 21, 2019
H&M, Smiggles and more
This week, miss Lee asked us to write a fabulous recount, or a narrative about are weekend/ based on a pobble picture. We had to add all the descriptive tools we have learnt. For example, verbs, metaphor, nouns and alliteration. Nouns are naming words. Alliteration is is at least 3 words with a same letter sound at the front
I chose to write about me going to malls.
Can you rate my writing from 1 to 10?
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