I was a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I shared my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, March 25, 2019
Character description
I tried to describe the character in my book. I tried to add what they did. What they felt. What they look like. And what they think.
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HI Keysha
ReplyDeleteI like it
you did a good job of writing
keep going Keysha
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ReplyDeletehello Keysha its len
ReplyDelete1 i like how you added lots of detail in your story
2 you did a great job on putting the full stops in the right place
3 can you please just add what the SPCA is
keep on going well done.
hi Keysha its Nas
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2 I like how you added lot of detail to your story
3 great job could you just add some more detail to your story
keep on keep on Keysha good job friend.