My awesome story web

Hi Bloggers,

During reading time we read a story. our group read a story a bike for brad. it is a story about a boy that wanted a BMX bike and winning a race.

We had to write out the characters, setting, problem. outcome and actions in the story. i found this activity hard to complete.

how would you feel if you were getting a new bike?

H&M, Smiggles and more

This week, miss Lee asked us to write a fabulous recount, or a narrative about are weekend/ based on a pobble picture. We had to add all the descriptive tools we have learnt. For example, verbs, metaphor, nouns and alliteration. Nouns are naming words. Alliteration is is at least 3 words with a same letter sound at the front

I chose to write about me going to malls.

Can you rate my writing from 1 to 10?