Thursday, August 8, 2019
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Hi Keysha, I really like how you added a lot of detail into your writing I also like how you added a lot of reasons of why mr Norman and Henk should bulid steps to go into the attic. Maybe next time you could work on how it can help people to work faster and much better and also next time you could check your spelling!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Keysha! First of all awesome piece of persuasive writing. I really like how you added what you can do in the attic. I also like how you added why there should be a attic. I think you could work on adding information on the stuff you wanted to put in the attic.
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Mya!