Blog Commenting

 What I know about commenting on blogs:

First you need to have a positive greeting. a positive comment that wont hurt their feelings. you have to have a question. to have no private information in the comment. after you did the greeting you have you make something thoughtful about the blog post. then you have to say something helpful that wont hurt peoples feelings and last you need to put a question. and now you done.

my first comment today is on roisin's blog 

What makes a Good Comment? Read this to find out more!

Hey bloggers.

Today in Cyber Smart we are working about what is a good comment and a bad comment and what is not a good comment and a comment with private information.

Can you see what's wrong with this comment?

Comment below.  

My learning came out good and I learnt about positive comments and now I know what makes a good comment.

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Persuasive Writing

Hey, Bloggers 

For writing today we made Persuasive Writing. We made persuasive writing before but we need to improve our writing. 

did you like or i need to improve more

My pirate hunt and start of term 3

hi blogger,

today i posted about yesterday it was a fun day and happy to see my friends.

ruby and cooper

hi, bloggers

for cybersmart we learned about ruby and cooper but cooper shared some stuff that is private.

learning Area

Hey bloggers,

Today i'm am posting about what i did for maths this week, so this week we learned about area. we tried to do area with squares. that answer for this area animal is 73.

Learning About me!

Hello Readers,

During Cybersmart last week we were learning about copyright. I learnt that we need to have 

permission for the images we use online. For this task we used the explore tool and also photographs

from a website called unsplash. We had to fill in the boxes to explain us.

here is the link to where the slide show was the help me with my learning

during this task it was really hard to make the photos fit into the boxes. we had to crop them and try hard to not stretch the photos. to crop an image you double click it so that instead of the blue squares you end up with black lines. these lines allow you to make the photo smaller with out stretching

A lot of the images I have used in this post can be found on this website Unslash (click on the word to be taken to the site)

Thank you for taking the time to read my post!

What is something you have learnt about me by looking at my DLO