Blog Commenting

 What I know about commenting on blogs:

First you need to have a positive greeting. a positive comment that wont hurt their feelings. you have to have a question. to have no private information in the comment. after you did the greeting you have you make something thoughtful about the blog post. then you have to say something helpful that wont hurt peoples feelings and last you need to put a question. and now you done.

my first comment today is on roisin's blog 

What makes a Good Comment? Read this to find out more!

Hey bloggers.

Today in Cyber Smart we are working about what is a good comment and a bad comment and what is not a good comment and a comment with private information.

Can you see what's wrong with this comment?

Comment below.  

My learning came out good and I learnt about positive comments and now I know what makes a good comment.

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Persuasive Writing

Hey, Bloggers 

For writing today we made Persuasive Writing. We made persuasive writing before but we need to improve our writing. 

did you like or i need to improve more